*sigh* That was beautiful. The first-person was a bit weird in the beginning, but then I suppose you got the hang of it because it became much better.
Actually my favorite style of yours is in Left-handed and Simple.
Just so you know, I was rereading the very end scene of Origins (that was so beautiful!*sob*) and the "Morning Lemon" and "Metaphysical" chapters of Belong. The part in "Metaphysical" when Draco finally realizes Harry loves him and loses control is just so..so...I love it! =D