This hit the spot, this was perfect. I loved Harry's take on things, his combination of bemusement and detatched, clinical observation and being-up-for-whatever: "He feels more a technicality kind of anger" and a million little observations like that. Your take on Cho -- or perhaps your take on Harry's take on Cho -- is wonderfully cruel, remorselessly funny. And it's all a perfect setup for Draco's slowly persuasive simplicity, his directness and honesty and quiet emotional nakedness. I just loved this. And it feels like something that will stick with me.