ivyblossom | Beta? Britpick?

Anyone around and willing to do a quick beta/britpick on a Sherlock fic? I finally worked myself up to doing a Sherlock POV, don't know how successfully, but it scratched that writing itch. It's not long, 1760 words, nothing explicit. I'd rate it G if slash can ever be rated G by the general population, but there is a single expletive in it. Needs a go over before I post it. It's in Google docs, if you're willing I'll add you as an editor. Yes/No?