Fucking Belong

Trouble on the Belong front. I couldn't sleep and I had a bunny in my head, so I pulled the computer into my lap and wrote the first half of Belong 17. 17!! What was I thinking. I want to show parts of it off, but that will totally blow 16, which is only about half done too. And....

Oh. Lib is online. Funny that.

Okay, I sent part of belong 17 to lib, and she thinks it should be it's own part just as it is. People would KILL me, it's a pretty brutal part. Short, and brutal. I think. Since I lived it already myself.

HA. My friend J. is talking about getting me a job as a ghostwriter for a few months. That would rock my world. Excuse me, if you are in Toronto and need to hire someone, please let me know. :) Wait, if you are anywhere in the WORLD and need to hire someone, let me know. I'm a good girl. I'm highly over educated. Yeah.

For the love of Mary Sues

The Saga of Raven by OriaAngel
Harry meets a new girl to hogwarts the first day of school. Malfoy lives near her and tries to pull her in. Ron is also an obstacle. But there is more then meets the eye to this girl. Please R&R.

Yes. Here I think we might see a Mary Sue whom everyone simply MUST know. Well, lookie here. The Girl's name is...Oria. (Note author's name.)

From her bio: Just read my stories and remove the magical powers from the girl named Oria. Let's see what we can learn about Oria from her story.

Oria had just gotten back from her volleyball tournament. HerÊ half shirt was clinging to her body, sweat dripped down her nose and her shorts were wet and getting easier to see through.Ê

So. Oria plays volleyball, doesn't shower afterward, and walks around with half a shirt on. She sweats a hell of a lot, too.

She took her hair out of the ponytail she had it in.Ê Her hair tumbled past her shoulders.

She has long hair, which falls out often.

Her room was decorated so oddly you’d think it was a fortune teller.

She lives in a room which looks like a fortune teller. This is a bit scary. Do you think it looks like the *inside* of a fortunte teller?

She slipped out of her four poster bed and walked over to her clock, she saw how late it was.

She's myopic as hell.

She tilted her head as she thought and her hair bounced as she did this.

No comment. No comment at all.

She hadn’t realized till now she still had her flannel PJ’s on under her black robe.

She's very very very stupid.

Ron was just staring atRaven, like most guys do, till he saw Malfoy.

For some reason she is also called 'Raven'. I bet she's a drooler. No wonder people stare at her.

If her name is Raven, will she be in Ravenclaw? She sounds smart, and sweet and brave. She’s everything but a Slytherin. I hope she is in our house.…

Wow, amazing how your voice can convey all that. That and they think she's a veela. So she's smart, sexy, sweet, and brave. Wow. Amazing.

My brain hurts. I have to stop learning about Oria. I need to go get very very drunk now.