I love the rhythm of the first three paragraphs. It really feels like the story is being told to me, but also makes seems like I’m eavesdropping somehow.
The story manages to be very funny and extremely sad at the same time.
Basically a story full of competing feelings; I love it.
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Date: 2003-04-21 08:08 am (UTC)The story manages to be very funny and extremely sad at the same time.
Basically a story full of competing feelings; I love it.