it surprises me that you haven't written in first person before because it seemed to come really naturally for you in that fic.
i loved the personal details, like about how quick he drinks, and Draco's hands, they really gave the fic a lot more depth and detail.
While i do want to know what happened to them before this night, part of me just wants it left as it is, because its so lovely and emotional and beautiful that i fear an epic plot would ruin the beauty of their relationship, and answering the questions this fic raises might just spoil it....
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Date: 2003-04-24 07:34 am (UTC)it surprises me that you haven't written in first person before because it seemed to come really naturally for you in that fic.
i loved the personal details, like about how quick he drinks, and Draco's hands, they really gave the fic a lot more depth and detail.
While i do want to know what happened to them before this night, part of me just wants it left as it is, because its so lovely and emotional and beautiful that i fear an epic plot would ruin the beauty of their relationship, and answering the questions this fic raises might just spoil it....